Poem

[klsb]

This is something i wrote for Fin :)

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Laying here, head on my feet,
I see my friend so soft and sweet.
Those big brown eyes that look up at me,
That tail that wags so easily.
His heart that loves so much, so big,
Those big fat feet that love to dig.
His little body,  so warm and round,
The chubby belly, so near the ground.
That mouth that barks, pants and smiles,
The nose that sniffs and snorts for miles.
Those ears that flop and drag sometime,
And that cute wiggly, waggy behind.
The last thing that makes up my friend,
Is faithfulness that never ends.
True love that’s not found in show or book,
To find it, All you have to do is look.
The one who makes my life complete,
Is laying here, head on my feet.

[papbouv]

Very Sweet and cute.

[Roberta]

Thats really good........Fin you have a talented mum.
Roberta

[Teresa]

That is wonderful! Describes the doxie so well.

[Dee Dee and Hallie]

That is wonderful!! You are a very gifted writer.

[klsb]

Ha ha this was just a silly little thing. Me and my mom write them all the time. For birthdays and stuff.

When i was alot younger i would always write them for my mom when she was mad at me.

[Dee Dee and Hallie]

Ooooh! Good tactic! I'll bet it worked too. LOL. Well you are very good at it and I imagine your Mom is too. That's a nice tradition.

[Barb]

*sniff*  awwwwwww.......

[Madderoos Mom]

Awwww!  I wanna meet Fin!

[Lowriders in Ohio]

Awwww!  I wanna meet Fin!

There are some dachsies on Wiener Writings who are just adorable even in writing.  I imagine that Fin, Parker, Hallie, and Porky Pie are unbelievably cute in person, just to name a few.

[PattyInAK]

Very beautiful poem!!!

[klsb]

I know me and my boyfriend are biased... But sometimes we will be playing with Fin and we'll be like " Do you think he's actually as cool/adorable/funny/smart as we think he is?"

[Spanish Teckels]

of course he is - even more so!
Loved the poem too.